For The Petulant Gods by Icarus (NC-17)

[hermitsoul]

Fandom: STARGATE SG-1
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Author on LJ: icarusancalion
Author Website: Icarus.Slash.Fiction
Why this must be read: 

You know the stories where Jack and Daniel declare their mutual love, hop into bed and have perfect gay sex?  Yeah, this isn't one of those.

With a grunt, Jack rose up higher and gripped Daniel's ass like enemy territory, though Daniel could tell already that that angle wasn't going to work. Daniel's knees skidded on the comforter slightly as he tried to lift up to accommodate. Thighs straining, they connected and Jack tried to force it with no leverage, which had predictable results. Or rather, the lack thereof. Daniel lowered slightly and Jack followed him, one arm scraping Daniel's side as he propped himself up, the warm head of his dick keeping on target. Um. Mostly.

Daniel briefly considered grabbing Jack's dick and aiming for him, except for the pillows, the angle, and the minor fact that he could almost feel Jack's ego deflate with every stroke.

For The Petulant Gods

Comments

[janecarnall.livejournal.com]

I tried to leave feedback there, and couldn't, so in the hope that Icarus comes by here sometime:

I was enjoying this story in a mild sort of way until I got to the *counts* last six paragraphs, which I read with a build-up of the kind of hilarity that can only express itself in a whoop of laughter.

I whooped. I am still snickering. Oh *god*. Oh, *Jack*. Poor Daniel.

[hermitsoul]

Jack does need a good whack upside the head. I am glad you enjoyed the rec!

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Thank you! That's weird, I did get your review earlier today. What happened when you tried to post it?

Icarus

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Meminisse, I was bewildered because I suddenly started to receive reviews for this story out of the blue.

Thank you very much.

Jack does need a good whack upside the head.

I agree, though I'm not sure it'll do much good. ;)

Icarus

[hermitsoul]

Cool! I loved the story and I am glad to hear others did also. And yeah, I don't envy Daniel at all. Well, maybe a little.

[janecarnall.livejournal.com]

I got a page with three or four checkboxes which I could tick and I'd get spam, so naturally I left them all blank and clicked continue. Then I got an error message. I presumed that the setup was that I couldn't send you feedback unless your hosting company got to send me spam, and so I cancelled and left the feedback here. Glad you got it anyway!

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Ugh. I need a different system.

Icarus