ext_79568 ([identity profile] the-hobbet.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van 2006-10-02 10:45 pm (UTC)

I think the first half was original, touching, and really wonderful. The second half was disappointing. The relationship seemed rushed and undeveloped. The sex was unoriginal and, frankly, boring.

PS. The cross-over part was great too :-)

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