fangirlism: (Mine! - BriNick)
Erika ([personal profile] fangirlism) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2008-09-08 04:51 pm
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"Merging Into More" by Melanie (NC-17)

Fandom: POPSLASH
Pairing: Brian/Nick
Length: 1,117 words
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] bellamyrose
Author Website: Sharing the Insanity
Why this must be read: Okay this is the last of the "stories I'm biased about" recs. This was the story written for me in 2007's Make the Yuletide Gay challenge, and while because of that it has a special place in my heart, it's not why I'm rec'ing it. It's not even because Brian/Nick is my OTP. It takes a lot to write a flat out PWP without making it sound choppy and being porn for porn's sake. So, I guess this isn't PWP. It's porn, but it's really admission of feelings. You can tell in the story that Brian's realizing how much he wants this.

"I want to make you feel good," he whispered, kissing Brian gently. "Can I?'

"Yesss," Brian hissed when Nicks teeth bit down on his own lip.

"Yes, what?" Nick asked, teasingly, looking down.

"Yes, please?" Brian gasped, panting. "Make me feel good, Nick. Make me feel so good."

"That I can do," Nick kissed him again, softer this time, before pulling back a little. Brian looked down to see Nick dropping his hand to his own jeans. He brushed his knuckles along the ridge Brian could see from here and pressed down hard. Looking back up and catching Brian watching, he unfastened the top button and smirked. "Like what you see?"

Brian could only nod in response, too busy watching Nick grip himself to do much else. Gentle teeth nipped his nose and he looked back up at his best friend.

"Are you sure you want to do this?" Nick asked, frowning. "I don't want you to regret it in the morning."

"I'm sure. It's something I've been dreaming of for a while." Brian smiled softly. "Kiss me, please?"

Eyes opened, he watched as Nick lowered his head to do as he'd asked. Parting his lips, he accepted the kiss, drowning in sensation. This had been a long time coming, and it felt like he'd been waiting forever.

"Merging Into More"
ext_8630: guh, ink + skin = ded (Default)

[identity profile] bellamyrose.livejournal.com 2008-09-22 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! *throws confetti* My very first rec that's not on a personal journal. *hugs*

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic, and doubly pleased that the feelings were as obvious to you as they were to me when I was writing.