ext_55350 ([identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2011-02-14 11:17 am

Six Moments of Valentine's by Erushi (R)

I didn't realise my first offering was locked so here's another bit of Valentine's goodness in place of it.

Fandom: THE PROFESSIONALS
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Length: 1,726 words
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] erushi
Author Website: http://hatstandfic.net/viewuser.php?uid=24
Why this must be read:


Erushi is not a well known Pros writer but I adore her style. She tends to write little one offs, but believe me when I say, even her little one offs are bits of pure pleasure. She has this special way of turning words into a musical experience which makes me smile and smile. It's truly a special treat when she posts. This is a short story she wrote for Valentine's Day in a Discovered in a Live Journal challenge.

They get so drunk that they begin tossing chocolates into each other’s mouths.

They get so drunk that, when Doyle nearly loses a tooth, Bodie offers to feed them straight into his mouth.

Bodie unwraps foils of silver and of gold with an earnestness only the inebriated can ever achieve before tipping sugar-laden confection after confection past parted lips, dark chocolate and milk chocolate and (oh, vile misnomer) white. His thumb is warm, soft, gentle, and each breath of laughter is a playful huff against Doyle’s ear.

Doyle allows himself to pretend that he is drunk enough that he can catch the pad of Bodie’s thumb with a pink dart of his tongue without either of them noticing. It tastes sweet and milky and perhaps just a little bitter, chocolate-like, and Bodie’s thumb lingers each time on the curve of his lower lip before sweeping softly over its outline and away.


Six Moments of Valentine's

[identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
What a fantastic choice of quote - so erotic.