ext_3712 ([identity profile] alethialia.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2012-09-27 08:47 am
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All the King's Horses by lunasky (R)

Fandom: GENERATION KILL
Pairing: Brad Colbert/Nate Fick
Length: 12,828
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] lunasky
Author Website: Perchance to Dream
Why this must be read:

Brad runs into the Fates; it goes about as well as you'd expect. [livejournal.com profile] lunasky rips your heart out with this one. For about 10k words I kept repeating, 'no, it can't go like this.' But in the best kind of way. It's wonderfully structured, intertwined with Brad's childhood fairytale anecdotes, all done in this perfect, bone-dry Brad narration. His internal monologue is gold: no-bullshit, hilarious, highly observant, while also being oblivious to the important things. Namely, Nate. But hey, that's what the Fates are for.

Brad whipped around, clutching his helmet in one hand, off-balance and confused. There were three old women, dressed in mismatched rags, sitting there cursing and swearing because he’d tripped over them. He could have sworn they weren’t there a moment ago.

All the King's Horses