ext_43218 ([identity profile] catatonic1242.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2005-01-05 09:20 am

Too Big by puddle_took (PG)

Fandom: LORD OF THE RINGS
Pairing: Merry/Pippin
Author on lj: [livejournal.com profile] puddle_took
Author website: Unknown
Why this must be read: It is so rare, for me, that second-person POV actually *works* in fic. This one does. Five smallish scenes capture Merry having a "big-feeling" for Pippin.

You would like to stop walking and have this conversation on a log or on the ground, but you have a feeling Gandalf wouldn't understand. So you reach for Pippin's hand instead and keep the pace. "If you tell me what I've done, I can tell you I didn't mean it and then you'll be yourself again. Right, Pip?"

Too Big

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