ext_38295 ([identity profile] thepurpleswitch.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2005-02-17 08:44 pm
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Her Virtues Slighted Be by Oro (PG)

Fandom: SPORTS NIGHT
Pairing: Jeremy/Natalie, side of Jeremy/Jenny
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] warlordkittens
Author Website: art and fiction: http://oro.incipience.net; fanfiction: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/72562/
Why this must be read:

Natalie and Jeremy are Meant To Be, let's take that as given, but it's damnably hard to get there.

I want to say something about how Or's Natalie is always so real and just as fragile, petty, human as we get to see her on the show, but I can't quite come up with the words.

excerpt:

She was so scared, at first, of getting back together with him: after the first time they had sex, she spent the rest of the day analyzing every sigh, every moan he made, wondering if he did the same with his adult film actress friend. She attributed every single improvement to that woman, and was not at all pleased, judging by how he's never been more passionate and gentle with her at the same time; it was perfection on a desk, dazzle on a chair, and heaven on the floor, and she's never been so petrified that she might not have been the one he's been thinking of the whole time.

/excerpt

So go. Her Virtues Slighted Be.

ps: Feedback. It's easy on ff.n, there's a review tool my puppy could use.

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