anenko.livejournal.com ([identity profile] anenko.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2005-09-03 07:03 am
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Two Steps Behind, by M. Kye (G)

Fandom: NOIR
Pairing: Mild Mireille/Kirika
Author on LJ: [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] Unknown
Author’s Website: Fanfiction.net Profile
Why this must be read:

There are a few glitches with grammar and verb tense, and the first person Kirika voice is more flowery and descriptive than I imagine she would actually be, but:

This is a nice look at Mireille and Kirika, and their relationship after the series ends. I appreciated Kirika’s focus on Mireille, as well as her constant awareness of the people around them as they walk the streets of Pairs; and Mireille’s playfulness and subtle signs of affection towards Kirika.

Two Steps Behind