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The Last Day of Endless Summer by Dee (PG-13)
Fandom: STAR WARS PT
Pairing: Gen. Anakin, Obi-Wan.
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cupiscent
Author Website: Furtive Scribblings - fanfic by Dee
Why this must be read:
Dee writes with breathtaking clarity, especially in finding the poignancy of small moments. She moves from the early years of their partnership to the later years that revolve around tight companionship. Here are Anakin and Obi-Wan in snapshots, from past to future, playing on Obi-Wan’s incomprehension and Anakin’s faith.
Obi-Wan helped Anakin up onto the pier, wet muddy handprints on the sleeves of his robes. "You're a disgrace," he offered, without any censure at all. Anakin grinned. Obi-Wan glanced out over the sun-bright lake and its shrieking contents before they turned and walked back down the pier. Anakin left footprints, drying rapidly under the hot sun.
"We'll need to head straight back. The message said something about Cato Niemoidia," Obi-Wan was saying, when Anakin laid a hand on his arm. Obi-Wan paused and turned, eyebrows raised in question.
Anakin was grinning, and that twisted Obi-Wan's stomach, as always, with the knowledge that he was about to suggest something Obi-Wan couldn't possibly imagine. "No," he said.
"No?" Obi-Wan repeated.
"We're not leaving," Anakin said, fingers curling in the sleeve of Obi-Wan's robe, "until you have just a little bit of fun."
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The Last Day of Endless Summer
Pairing: Gen. Anakin, Obi-Wan.
Author on LJ:
cupiscentAuthor Website: Furtive Scribblings - fanfic by Dee
Why this must be read:
Dee writes with breathtaking clarity, especially in finding the poignancy of small moments. She moves from the early years of their partnership to the later years that revolve around tight companionship. Here are Anakin and Obi-Wan in snapshots, from past to future, playing on Obi-Wan’s incomprehension and Anakin’s faith.
Obi-Wan helped Anakin up onto the pier, wet muddy handprints on the sleeves of his robes. "You're a disgrace," he offered, without any censure at all. Anakin grinned. Obi-Wan glanced out over the sun-bright lake and its shrieking contents before they turned and walked back down the pier. Anakin left footprints, drying rapidly under the hot sun.
"We'll need to head straight back. The message said something about Cato Niemoidia," Obi-Wan was saying, when Anakin laid a hand on his arm. Obi-Wan paused and turned, eyebrows raised in question.
Anakin was grinning, and that twisted Obi-Wan's stomach, as always, with the knowledge that he was about to suggest something Obi-Wan couldn't possibly imagine. "No," he said.
"No?" Obi-Wan repeated.
"We're not leaving," Anakin said, fingers curling in the sleeve of Obi-Wan's robe, "until you have just a little bit of fun."
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The Last Day of Endless Summer
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