ext_6564 ([identity profile] bantha-fodder.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2006-12-03 09:05 pm
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Push the Bruise by zeplum (R)

Fandom: The Pretender
Pairing: Jarod/Miss Parker
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] zeplum
Author Website: [livejournal.com profile] saintstreet

Why this must be read:

A recurring motif on The Pretender was always the competition between Miss Parker and Jarod, that race to finish first and to beat the other. This is often reflected in fiction by agressive sex and teasing, tantalising hints left behind. They want to work together but they're so used to fighting that they can't.

[livejournal.com profile] zeplum writes them hard against the wall and with their guns on the floor, and I thought that bruises in the places where no one can see was an appropriate spot to start this introduction to The Pretender.



"Do you do anything but tease?" Parker bites out, frustrated.

His answer is physical. Large, square hands round her hips, pushing her skirt up, lifting one of her legs to wrap around his body. Hard heat through his jeans, and he fits against her perfectly. Parker bites her lip and rocks down against him.

Everything's a competition and they both know it. Have for a long time.




Push the Bruise

Pretender!

[identity profile] taiamu.livejournal.com 2006-12-03 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh. I loved this show way back when. Yeah, I know it's crack, but I loved it for the little character moments. :)

Thanks for bringing it to Crack_Van!

[identity profile] stopawhile.livejournal.com 2006-12-03 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Could you please put the rating in round brackets? It makes my job easier when I add it to memories. Thanks.

[identity profile] plumtastic.livejournal.com 2006-12-04 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks babe. I thought the bruise motif was particular apt too.
medie: queen elsa's grand entrance (pretender - always there - otp)

[personal profile] medie 2006-12-05 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I am so *GLAD* you recced this one here. There are literally no words for how awesome I find this story!