ext_2015 ([identity profile] gardendoor.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2008-01-20 06:35 pm
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Sins of Adam by Nea Dods (PG-13)

Fandom: DOCTOR WHO
Pairing: Not really
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] neadods
Why this must be read:

After the debacle Adam caused when he came on board, it takes a while for the Doctor to trust Jack.

"Don't I get dipped too?" Jack pouted. Rose squeaked. The Doctor spun him in a quick half-turn first, sweeping Jack into the same dip as he had Rose -- only this time, Jack's head grazed close enough to the console to flip the RAF hat over his face. Rose squeaked again. Jack burst out laughing... but as he shook the hat off, for a moment their eyes met and Jack nodded slightly. Threat understood.

Good. The Doctor pulled him back upright and let go.

"I'm cutting in," Rose announced directly behind his left ear; when the Doctor reached for her, she ducked, giggling, under his arm and went to Jack. Jack glanced quickly at the Doctor -- was he asking permission? -- before leading her in grand sweeps around the room.

The Doctor watched them thoughtfully. Look at that, he's managing to swing by every exit and control panel. She thinks they're just dancing, but he's checking out the place. Smart. Subtle.


Sins of Adam

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