ext_2838 ([identity profile] betzz.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2008-07-22 01:24 pm
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Citrus by afropuff (R)


Fandom: THE SENTINEL
Pairing: Jim/Blair
Length: 12k 
Author on LJ: am still looking
Author Website:  stories at 852 Prospect

Why this must be read: Because it's the best first kiss ever!

This story may be short, but it's also ... perfection. Think Jim, think Blair, think breakfast and oranges. First!Kiss!fic doesn't get much better than this. 

Wait a second. Wait!! What was happening here? My entire body suddenly went up in an all consuming flame as I wondered what exactly was happening here. Jim was feeding me orange sections. Wet, juicy, firm orange sections. And, he wasn't exactly feeding me, he was...playing with me. In my confused state, I went to bite the fruit, but he pulled it out of reach, making me lunge forward slightly. After the second time, he gave a tiny shake of his head and I stopped.



 Citrus

[identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com 2008-07-22 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I loved that! Really did build up the intensity beautifully.

[identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com 2008-07-22 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
::goes to read:: Thank you!

[identity profile] micah-loden.livejournal.com 2008-07-22 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
What a great rec. I love it when they're happy and feeling uncomplicated. This whole thing makes me want some breakfast. Or something.

[identity profile] solar-cat.livejournal.com 2008-07-22 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that was SO good! Thanks for the wonderful rec! =D

[identity profile] solar-cat.livejournal.com 2008-07-26 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, yay! *goes to seek it*