ext_40038 ([identity profile] henrycat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2008-08-28 08:37 pm

Smoking in the Shower (NC17) by SassyInkPen

Fandom: TOUR OF DUTY
Pairing: Lieutenant Myron Goldman/Lieutenant John J. McKay
Length: 843 words
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] sassyinkpen
Author website: Notes From the Underground, Sassy's Smut Emporium

Why this must be read:

Goldman and Anderson are considered the OTP in this fandom, but then there is the fire and clash of Goldman and McKay that can't be resisted. And no one captures it better than Sassy. There is a very well known canon scene that has these two men in the shower with Goldman smoking. It's fascinating and you can't help wondering how he can shower and smoke at the same time. After all, who the hell smokes in the shower?

Sassy takes us for a fun romp with these two men in the shower, in broad daylight in the middle of an Army camp in Vietnam. Why Myron, like no one else, can make smoking look so incredibly sexy.

Excerpt:

He turned back to McKay. No matter how hard he tried he couldn't stop his eyes from wandering any longer. He groaned inwardly as his gaze traveled down McKay's wet body. *God*, he was so fucking clueless. Goldman was tired of fighting and pretending...and it just pissed him off.

"...Goldman? Are you even listening to me?"

Goldman blinked back to McKay's face as McKay cocked his head to reinforce the question. He looked at McKay and felt something click over in his brain. He *was* damn tired of fighting...

Smoking in the Shower by SassyInkPen

Tags: fanfic, tour of duty