ext_1567 ([identity profile] destina.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2004-03-20 11:30 am
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Gifts for your Gift by The Grrrl (NC-17)

Fandom: STARGATE SG-1
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Author on LJ: N/A
Author Website: http://www.geocities.com/coffeeslash/thegrrrl/
Why this must be read: I go back to this story when I need a break from angst. It's a happy story. Jack and Daniel are in an established relationship here, but they are still learning about each other, moving through some awkward moments as they find their way through new territory. The story is a progression of scenes -- at home, on base, offworld -- as Jack and Daniel fall deeper into each other and create new boundaries. I loved the way even the most ordinary of moments become temptations; the characters are discovering things about each other in unexpected ways. There are some lovely, subtle moments of realization. And also, some scorching hot sex. And great dialogue.


Daniel grunted, and opened his eyes. He didn't seem at all startled to find Jack's face inches from his. He just stared for a moment and asked sleepily, "You okay?"

Jack nodded. "Yeah." It was all he could think of saying. He was too tired to find the words that might explain why he was just lying there longing for Daniel, wondering why he needed his touch so badly. It wasn't the time to start a discussion like that.

"Huh." Daniel was clearly unconvinced. He untucked his arm, reached out, and patted Jack's shoulder, then squeezed it.

Jack's body stiffened, then relaxed. Patting was a casual thing, he knew, especially on the shoulder through layers of clothing and down. He'd patted all of them at some time or another, even Carter. Still, none of it explained why it felt like such a relief to have Daniel's hand on his shoulder, to have Daniel's face so close to his, close enough to feel Daniel's breath on his skin. Slowly, without really wanting to, yet needing to, he slipped his arm out from under his head and placed his hand on top of Daniel's. Patting. It wasn't even as if their skin was touching, since they were both wearing gloves. But then Daniel sort of smiled at him, not really moving his lips, just a twitch of his face, a slight narrowing of his eyes, and Jack found himself moving in closer and kissing Daniel's forehead.

It was only a minor blip on the grand scheme of things they shouldn't ever do on a mission, Jack thought as his dry, chapped lips lingered on Daniel's skin. The way Daniel's hair tickled his nose was oddly soothing. And the way Daniel lifted his chin, his lips seeking and finding Jack's--okay, that was wrong, Jack thought, stepping over the line completely. Daniel shouldn't have kissed him, and he shouldn't be kissing Daniel back, and he certainly shouldn't be licking Daniel's lips like that.

He pulled back, and saw that Daniel's eyes were closed again. He wondered if Daniel would even remember this in the morning. Jack knew, though, that he would, that he wouldn't be able to forget it.


Gifts for your Gift

[identity profile] lainy122.livejournal.com 2004-03-20 05:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Warm fuzzies! *bg* Thanks for sharing ^_^