lyr: (Faithlife: nomadicwriter)
lyr ([personal profile] lyr) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2010-03-24 11:52 pm

Better Luck With Girls by shrift (R)

Fandom: BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER
Pairing: Buffy/Faith
Length: 900 words
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] shrift
Author Website: shrift's fan fiction
Why this must be read: This short piece covers the back and forth dance between Buffy and Faith from the beginning all the way to post-"Chosen", which is pretty amazing for such a short snippet. Even more impressive is the fact that it does so with spot-on voices and strikingly vivid detail-work. Shrift does an excellent job of making this seem like a much longer story, and also of making it seem entirely inevitable that things must have happened just exactly this way.

Third time, Faith was horny from a slay and craving a bacon cheeseburger and some chili fries, so she crowded Buffy against a dusty headstone and kissed her, slipping her hand up Buffy's skirt. Faith slid two fingers up the inside of Buffy's bare thigh, tapped her fingertips against the crotch of Buffy's panties, and said, "I got bad luck with boys. Better luck with girls."

"I can't, no," Buffy said, although the tilt to her hips was more like a yes.

Better Luck With Girls

[identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com 2010-03-25 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
That was fantastic. I was offline for over a week, so now I have a whole sheaf of recommendations to sift through. Thanks!