ext_2441 ([identity profile] snycock.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2010-06-08 08:21 pm
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Making Contact by Sara (NC-17)

Fandom: THE SENTINEL
Pairing: Jim/Blair
Length: 28k
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] sara_merry99
Author Website: List of her Sentinel fic on LJ
Why this must be read:

Of course, being by [livejournal.com profile] sara_merry99, it's wonderfully hot and sweet and just a little bit angsty, but the reason I love this story so much is the absolutely delicious descriptions she comes up with for Jim's perceptions.



I stood by the table, mesmerized by him, by the smell of him, old semen and new arousal and cinnamon soap. By the sight of his hand holding the edge of the sofa like he was afraid he'd fly away. By the feel of body heat five feet away. By his hair, dancing on a breeze even I could barely sense. My sense of touch opened to him, jasmine hot snare-drum Blair, and I could feel the silky, living movement of his hair on my hand, on my chest, on my dick, which was pressing the fly of my jeans like I was either a much younger man or I hadn't already come twice less than two hours before. I stood there in the middle of the floor like an idiot, the two beers forgotten in my hands, as that jasmine jazz hot smoke Blair-feeling took over my reality. Everything aside from Blair faded away.



Making Contact