ext_1013 ([identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2010-09-30 11:50 pm
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Again, This Time by dessertfirst (NC-17)

Fandom: DUE SOUTH
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Length: 20k
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] dessert_first
Author Website: Fic Masterlist
Why this must be read:

Well, folks, this is my last rec. It's been a pleasure, and I hope I've made up at least partially for my pun-happy introduction. *g*

This fic does so much well. For one thing, I love it when characters take a shot in the dark and make the Big Confession when they have no idea how it'll pan out, so the first line of this fic had me instantly invested.

Also, I really admire the way [livejournal.com profile] dessert_first wrote this. She manages to balance Ray's desperation and determination while keeping the narration simple and unsentimental. I think that's impressive in a fic that could have turned maudlin fast. Instead, it maintains a believable tone and dialogue that shows Ray Kowalski at his most stubbornly courageous.

A beautiful fic, and a great note to end the month on!


"So, forget the love. We can, you know--how do you feel about sex?"

Fraser turns so red Ray's afraid he'll set off the smoke alarm. "Ah, sex, Ray?" he stammers, buying time.

Ray rolls his shoulders, gearing up to stand his ground. He's committed. "Yeah, Fraser. Sex. Definitions vary, but it generally involves two or more people achieving physical gratification in some proximity to each other."

"That's... a beautiful sentence, Ray." Fraser tugs his collar, eyes staring off vaguely. "Fairly naughty, and not the most poetic, but..."

"Oh, there's more where that came from buddy, believe me."



Again, This Time