anenko.livejournal.com ([identity profile] anenko.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2004-05-18 06:58 pm

First Warning, by Rave (PG13)

Fandom: Pirates of the Carribean
Pairing: Jack/Will
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] dorkorific
Author’s Website: con fuego, baby
Why this must be read:

This is one of my all-time favourite Jack/Will fics. The voices are excellent, the dialogue snappy, and Rave doesn’t forget that Jack and Will weren’t best buddies throughout the film. Both characters are flawed, but treated with love in this story.

    Will stared at it suspiciously, then back at Sparrow. “What do I do?”

    Sparrow rolled his eyes and thumped his bare feet onto the table. “What d’you do. Idiot. You drink it! ’S why it’s in a bottle! Not complicated!”

    Life of sin, Will thought dismally, might as well go all the way, and closed his eyes, leaned his head back and tipped the bottle up.

    It hit his tongue like fire, closing off the back of his throat and making his tongue arch up in his mouth and he spluttered and spat furiously, coughing and clutching at his burning chest. “It tastes like soap!”

    “Nonsense. Thass nat’ral vitamins. And that was a waste,” and Sparrow made a grab for the bottle.

    Will snatched it protectively to his chest. “I didn’t say it was bad soap. Get your own.”


First Warning

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