http://merentha13.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2011-10-19 09:27 pm

In the Interest of Bodie and Doyle by Maddalia (teen/mature)

Fandom: THE PROFESSIONALS
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Length: ~2600 words
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] maddalia
Author’s Stories: Maddalia
Why this must be read: a lovely first time story by a new Pro’s writer

There are many talented "long-time" writers in the Pro’s fandom. I thought this time I’d spotlight a talented new writer. Maddalia has written a warm, humorous and entertaining version of how the lads might have worked up to their “first time”. The actions and voices she gives the lads are well drawn. We get a teasing Ray and a hesitant Bodie and an ending that both the lads and readers want!



But Doyle was different; he was - exceptional. There was something soft about him, yet he was so male, both at the same time. Whatever it was, Bodie was tired of fighting it, especially when that striking, nigh-on perfect little body was being offered to him on a plate.

And there was something so forbidden about desiring it, that Bodie couldn’t help but be turned on. He liked to get things he wasn’t really supposed to have, or even want. He felt smug as all hell - yet he knew very well he had a wide-eyed, nervous expression on his face.

‘Ray ...’ he croaked.

‘Just say stop,’ said Doyle, moving against him ... Bodie squeezed his eyes shut, pressing his mouth into a thin line, trying to stop himself from moaning out loud at the sudden friction ... ‘and I’ll stop.’

‘That’s not fair,’ Bodie complained, ‘you’re not giving me a chance to ... ohh ... God, Ray ...’

Go ahead and give Maddalia a try. You won’t be disappointed!

In the Interest of Bodie and Doyle

[identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com 2011-10-20 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I completely missed this wonderful writing when it was first posted so thanks very much for the rec!

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2011-10-20 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really enjoyed our new writer's offerings. Thanks for the rec. *g*