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MF Luder ([personal profile] mf_luder_xf) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2011-10-31 10:46 am
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Red is the color of blood, and I will seek it by Niz4 (NC-17)

Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Jess
Length: ~8,700
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] niz4
Author Website: Fanfic is all archived at [livejournal.com profile] speak_roughly

I've always been a fan of Dean/Jess and girl!Sam fics and this is sort of the best of both worlds. In this fic, Jess is actually Dean's sister (so yes, it's still Wincest, for those wary). What I love about this is not just the possibilities but how the author captures not only the classic things we see in girl!Sam and the brother-sister relationship, but Jess as we so briefly knew her is captured as well. The author writes a gorgeous turn of phrase with elegant details that gives the story a nice Lolita feeling.


Sometimes it’s like he’s still there.

During the day you do research or you work the odd job, while she does her schooling, and then at night, at night you hunt. And it’s in the hunt that you still feel him.

Sometimes, it’s so strong this feeling that you sneak thief glances out of the corner of your eyes hoping to catch him there, but he never is, and it teaches you another valuable lesson. It teaches you that sometimes Hope has a liar’s tongue.

You’re true to your word and she goes with you, always. Ghosting your footsteps, this slip of a girl dressed in jeans and plain tees, your old hand-me-down sweat shirts, that start out too small for her but gradually you notice how – just like Alice in the rabbit’s house – she stretches out under these rolled up fabric arms, easing into them.

Jess walks beside you on her quiet feet through these dark times, watching your back as you do hers, and you do right by each other.

Afterwards, in the black of the night, she rests beside you in your bed. Her thin fingers fluttering against yours and she whispers a promise into your ear, in a low voice meant just for you she say, We’ll catch them all, Dean – just you and me. We’ll hunt them down. And when they hide?

We’ll find them.



Red is the color of blood, and I will seek it

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