http://surexit.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] surexit.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2004-07-14 05:59 pm

The Two Of Us, Versus You by Belinda (R)

Fandom: LOTRIPS
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Author's LJ: [livejournal.com profile] eyebrowofdoom
Author's Site: FOREHEAD SPACE

Why this must be read:

Mainly for the style. This is like watching a film: all show and no tell, and skilfully done. Also, because it's funny and cute.

Elijah stiffens in mid-wriggle. Billy turns and sees Dom in the doorway. Dom is not wearing his pyjama pants, on account of Billy wearing them: he is wearing trackpants. Dom has one foot forward, has not transferred his weight onto it. A blank blind has dropped over his face.

Billy smiles. He says, "I'm just explaining the facts of life to our young Elijah here."

He hears Elijah give a little huff. One of Billy's hands on Elijah's back beckons Dom over.

When Dom comes forward, his face has begun to move again, is no longer like a wax cast of itself. Billy pushes Elijah back into Dom, sandwiching Elijah between them. Billy's hands curl around Dom's bare sides. Now Dom smiles, and puts his arms around Elijah and Billy in turn.

Elijah says, "You know it's okay, you guys, you know, I just got a bit of a shock, but it's fine, I was just..."

"Shh!" Dom says, tightening his grip around the two of them. "Where are we up to in the lesson, Billy?"

Billy gives a bit of a shove back against Elijah, and feels the impact in his own hands on Dom's waist, his palms getting sticky against Dom's skin. Billy says, grinning, "I was just telling Elijah that sometimes, when Daddy and Daddy love each other very much..."

Dom grins back at Billy over Elijah's shoulder. He gives a long, slow sort of a wriggle against Elijah, and then Billy gives one as well, and then Elijah is saying, his voice high, "I know what Daddy and Daddy do, okay, I know already, you don't have to demonstrate!"


The Two Of Us, Versus You

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