Intruder by Million Moments (G)

[magician113.livejournal.com]

Fandom: Fairy Tales: Goldilocks and the Three Bears
Characters: Mama Bear, Papa Bear, Baby Bear, Goldilocks
Length: 1402 words
Author Website: at AO3

Why this must be read: Nice expanded scene of the bears' reactions when they came home to find devastation. What were they thinking when they found Goldilocks? Why didn't they simply eat her and be done with it? Answers inside.

I had to laugh when I saw the author's notes. She wrote this as an assignment for a creative writing class. I expect that happens quite a bit as inventive fans hone their skills through all available means. Enjoy.

Intruder

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Comments

[brunettepet.livejournal.com]

Goldilocks deserved worse.

[magician113.livejournal.com]

LOL, try this one

http://archiveofourown.org/works/863738

;^)

[bluewolf458.livejournal.com]

Intruder was unusual, but I think I liked this one much better! :-)

[brunettepet.livejournal.com]

That was wonderful!

[magician113.livejournal.com]

Yes, I read it after I'd already posted Intruder. Since both of you enjoyed it I'll post it on its own later in the month, so people don't miss it. Thanks for letting me know. :)