ext_14603 ([identity profile] tobiascharity.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2005-01-06 07:52 pm

Focus, by s.a. (PG)

Author s.a.
Fandom Law & Order: Criminal Intent
Pairing none
Author on LJ [livejournal.com profile] sathinks
Author website fubos
Why this story must be read

Look, I love long stories. I crave plot like it's a drug. The higher the wordcount, the more likely I am to read a story, and it'll sit there open on my desktop for days while I work and write and then I'll come back and read, and yeah. I love long stories.

Which is why it's so strange that I love this story.

Occasionally, a writer will come along whose work conveys an absolute understanding of a character. For s.a., this character is Goren, and that... that's a remarkable feat. Goren is not someone whose layers you can peel away to reveal the soft cuddly teddy bear underneath. If there is a teddy bear under all of that psychosis, he'll bite your hand off and swallow it. But s.a., in one of the most powerful short stories -- so short it's just this side of flash fiction -- I've ever read, reveals Goren to us, and also illustrates how the bizarre partnership of Eames and Goren balances itself so delicately. And she shows us the Goren that could be, without that carefully orchestrated balance.

s.a. paints one of the most realistic depictions of partnership -- cop or otherwise -- I've ever read. Read this story for that, or read this story for the solid characterization of Goren, or read it for both. (And if you enjoy it, don't forget to feedback the author.)

Focus

[identity profile] between-names.livejournal.com 2005-01-06 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't recognize the characters. What fandom is this?

[identity profile] flyingtapes.livejournal.com 2005-01-07 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for the very flattering rec. I really appreciate it. :) Though if it's not too much trouble, could you change the author name to SA? I dropped the dots about two years ago. Thanks again!

[identity profile] angelfirenze.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
The link is broken. Woe. Is anyone capable and/or willing to renew it? *lower lip trembles at the injustice*