ext_949 ([identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2006-08-22 11:06 pm
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Sometimes, there are no words by The Grrrl (NC-17)

FANDOM: NCIS
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Author on LJ: thegrrrl2002
Author Website: TheGrrrl

Why this must be read: If I had to pick one word to describe what I love about this story it'd have to be 'Banter.' Sizzling wouldn't be far behind but sex is easy (sometimes) to write. Banter is hard. This author nails it. She nails it without Gibbs or DiNozzo sounding like somebody they're not. It's funny and playful and shows that 'thing,' that chemistry these two men have on the show.


"It'll be a series of books, about this fictional team of crime-fighters, a special crack team--"

Gibbs raises an eyebrow. "Sounds familiar."

"Full of mystery and danger and sex--lots of sex."

Gibbs' hand stills on the final button. "Sex?"

"Yes," Tony nods, and smiles his most brilliant smile. "The hero of the stories, a young, brash cop, is having a tempestuous affair with the seasoned team leader."

"Seasoned." It is a statement, not a question



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[identity profile] nakeisha.livejournal.com 2006-08-23 10:14 am (UTC)(link)
Nothing to do with the story as such as I don't ship Gibbs/DiNozzo, but I found something you said really interesting.

but sex is easy (sometimes) to write. Banter is hard.

For me (and for quite a few people I know) it's the complete opposite. Banter is easy, the sex is the hard bit. (And I'm not just talking for NCIS; I've found this in any of the fandoms in which I've written).

Just an idle comment, I'll go away now :-)
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[personal profile] sperrywink 2006-08-24 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the rec! That was a great story and I had no idea [livejournal.com profile] thegrrrl2002 even wrote anything in this fandom!