Say When by Cupidsbow (R)

[hermitsoul]

Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Author on LJ: cupidsbow
Author Website: Cupidsbow Story Listing
Why this must be read:

A lovely look at what could be sometime down the road.

"Like crazy," he said, and kissed Tony hard, kissed him on the mouth and neck and above his eyebrow, kissed him with soft-mouthed passion, kissed him with a familiar desperate heat, kissed him the way Gibbs had always kissed him, right from day one; that rainy late-autumn day that Tony had driven Gibbs home, thinking it was Goodbye, it's been swell, the taste of retirement-party champagne faint on his tongue, and instead Gibbs had unhooked his seatbelt, leaned over the handbrake, and claimed Tony like he couldn't wait another minute.

Say When

Comments

[cupidsbow.livejournal.com]

You've just given me a big happy. Thank you.

[hermitsoul]

Loved the story, hope others like it as much as I did! Thanks for sharing it with us.

[canetr.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for writing this story. I loved it. You are able to relay a "whatever happened to" story with so few words. The description of the boat on water: so Gibbs finally finished it and miraculously got it out of the basement. He's also living in it with the image of the closet and Tony having clothes in there as well as the galley. My favorite scene is Tony saying "You bought me Coco Puffs". With these 5 words you show how in love they are. Gibbs knows Tony well enough to know what he likes for breakfast and will go out of his way to buy it for him despite Gibbs' unwillingness to touch the Coco Puffs with a 10 foot oar. And Tony realizes Gibbs bought him the Coco Puffs because he loves him. Such an "awwww" moment.

I noticed you wrote this based on someone's specific request for domestic bliss. I hope she is satisfied with the story because I certainly am. I could go on but enough of my ramblings.

[cupidsbow.livejournal.com]

You're very welcome. Thank *you* for the lovely feedback. It always makes me happy to know someone has enjoyed one of my stories :)