sinfulslasher: (michael reading sexy)
sinfulslasher ([personal profile] sinfulslasher) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2011-10-02 08:47 pm
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Senseless by cheekymice (PG-13)

Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: None. (Characters: Tony DiNozzo, Team)
Length: about 2,800 words
Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] cheekymice
Author Website: Cheekymice on FF.Net II cheekymice's NCIS fic on LJ
Warning: Major character death!
Why this must be read: This story makes me cry every single time I read it. Even though I know who dies and how it happens. But that's exactly it; the "how" is so, well, senselessly and stupidly realistic, I could actually see it happen on the show. (Good lord, please, never ever let that happen on show!!! LOL!) But while you read it, you won't be able not to imagine it in technicolor. Which makes the story so heart-wrenching.

Excerpt:
The stupid thing was Tony hadn't actually been dicking around when he lost his footing. He'd been helping Palmer awkwardly maneuver the gurney down the slope when his feet had hit a sheet of ice and disappeared right out from under him. I'd watched as he all but cart-wheeled down the slope, he'd even managed to knock Ziva onto her ass on the way down, and all I could do was wince when he eventually crashed headfirst into a tree.

Tony looked stunned for a second. Then he'd shaken his head and blinked several times in shock before he eventually unfolded his body from around the base of the sycamore. He then stood up and gave several exaggerated bows. Everybody laughed, except me. Not because I wasn't amused, but sometimes, like a class of unruly children, they all needed reminding we had work to do.



Senseless

[identity profile] duonoaikouka.livejournal.com 2011-10-02 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh very heart-wrenching choice. Thanks for sharing this as I'd never seen it before. I enjoy deathfics to the hilt so this was a real treat.

[identity profile] angst-queen-98.livejournal.com 2011-10-04 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, I swear I am *not* stalking you but I had to say thanks for reccing this one in particular. You see, I was about to post a search for it at the NCIS ficfind LJ comm last week but... I had myself convinced at the last minute that what I was remembering had to be a Torchwood (Ianto dying) fic and couldn't possibly (I don't know WHY!) be NCIS with Tony dying.

*shakes head*

Iz good to diversify fic finding comms!!! LOL