ext_1642 ([identity profile] elke-tanzer.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] crack_van2004-08-04 01:05 am

"Why Don't You Try Me For Real Some Time?" by Tonbo (NC17)

Fandom: RANMA 1/2
Pairing: Akane Tendo/Ranma Saotome
Author on LJ: unknown
Author Website: Tonbo's Fanfiction Page
Why this must be read:

Sometimes first-time sex should be plenty of physical contact, unresolved tension and innuendo finally getting the better of the characters, hot and sweaty on the dojo floor, and not quite sure if what they're doing is a martial arts rivalry or a seduction of each other.

"Why Don't You Try Me For Real Some Time?"

[identity profile] ebonbird.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
This story had really been a guilty pleasure for me. It's so very wrong, offensive and perverse... and the subtext is alarming. But, it's also so very Akane and Ranma in that he's acting like an utter ass and his thinking, already beleagured by self-righteousness, an ego the size of a mountain, and insecurity combined with Akane's particular issues makes this sensical.

This thing is horrifyingly funny, I think, for someone who isn't used to the story. And it's also really great with the genderfuck.