Fandom: Angel
Pairing: Angel/Spike
Length: 2478 words
Author on LJ:
girlpireAuthor Website: just her LJ
Warnings: Masturbation, exhibitionism/voyeurism, slight masochism
Why this must be read: During the ghostly!Spike days of fifth season AtS, Angel finds that it's bizarrely reassuring to have someone watching him, even, and perhaps especially, if that someone is Spike. I like the spare, pensive quality with which
girlpire imbues Angel's POV in this story; she writes his existence with a hollow sort of echo to it that's quite striking and very effective at communicating Angel's loneliness at this point in his character arc. Part of the method she uses to manage this is the delicious way the lines Angel
doesn't say mean more than those he does. Restraint is one of the harder skills to master as a writer; it's very tempting to go full speed ahead in one's zeal to sway the audience. That's why it impresses me that
girlpire uses just exactly the right level of restraint, saying just enough to sketch the emotions she wants to evoke, but not so much that she renders them garishly blatant. The end result is wonderfully subtle, quietly sad, and just exactly right. Plus, there's a sense of 'you can't always get what you want...but if you try, sometimes you just might find you get what you need' to the ending that I find narratively interesting and very satisfying.
Something Like Comfort